For my portfolio I chose to revise my narrative essay simply because I feel that I did a pretty good job paying attention to the audience since it was one of my strengths. I'd say that over all the essays that I've worked on, this one was the most strongest because it helped me keep track of what I was writing about and to whom I was directing it towards to. Also because I had a a clear way to keep the tone as when I started the essay and that I find difficult to keep focus of but in this paper I'm pretty sure I kept it the same.
To effectively revise my essay I will focus on more on my grammatical errors and pay close attention unto not repeating myself or rephrasing the same idea again. And lastly I will try to keep a longer length of the essay.
Then to rewrite my essay I will make sure I write everything out first make sure it's in chronological order, make see I don't loose my tone and keep track of the audience I am writing for. Lastly I shall check my grammar and punctuation as well. :D
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