My paper for my literacy narrative is slightly different from my rough draft considering that I added and edited the last part to my essay since it was very short and I didn't finish it. I believe that I made sufficient revisions to the focus of my paper because I was so afraid that I would skip to another topic or just completely mix another topic to my essay and loose track if what I was writing about.
After revision I was able to distinguish the patterns of errors I make which are usually writing long but very long sentences that I forget about my punctuations marks. What guide me to make the revisions I made to my paper was the peer review because I was able to understand what the reader would enjoy more and what I mistakes I did.
I think the strongest part of my paper is around the middle part of the essay and the weakest would probably be in the end because I think that I could've had a stronger ending, but I didn't.
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